Date: 22 Dec 2010 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this....Was nice to find more of your work. Been so long since I have read anything from you. Hope all is well and good luck with future writing! :)
Loved this....Was nice to find more of your work. Been so long since I have read anything from you. Hope all is well and good luck with future writing! :)
I really liked the story but I think you should have continued it. That's just my opinion in otherwords I liked it so much I didn't want it to end and of was kinda short :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Awww, sooo cute. Poor Edward. How horrible to be able to read your daughter's mind, and the mind of her boyfriend. :/ Sometimes I forget just how intricate the characters are because they aren't human, but you've written them so well that you reminded me. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you :) It was a lot of fun to get inside their heads in this scenario *g*